Wednesday, April 29, 2009

JUNIOR THEME: conclusion??? HELPPPPPPP

Alright, so I am basically done writing my paper, and the editing process has begun...
however, I don't have a conclusion.  I have been sitting here staring at my computer for the past 20 minutes trying to figure out what to say in order to wrap up my JT. AHHHH!!! I can't stare at a white screen anymore with a flashing cursor and no words!!!
HELP!!

Any suggestions as to what i should put in my conclusion?????

just to remind you, my thesis is: 

Standards of beauty are set by advertisement agencies, stereotypical gender roles and the cosmetic industry's constant push for one to be "more beautiful", therefore women obsess over their own appearance, sometimes to a harmful extent, in order to meet societal standards. 

1 comment:

Adam said...

Andrea, I think that in your conclusion you need to make a personal connection to your issue. Throughout your papers body parragraphs, you focus on expalining the issue in a non-bias format. Though in the conclusion, you have an oppurtunity to make a choice and take a personal stance.
good luck cabaaaage